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Writing essays is a core skill for secondary school students. By Years 12 and 13 students should ideally be able to express sophisticated ideas coherently and effectively.

But back in Year 9 and 10, basic structure can be an issue before we even get to developing ideas, making self to text connections and all the other good stuff that displays deep level thinking.

My Year 9 class are typically (I hope) diverse. The 27 learners span three curriculum levels. Differentiation is key – how to keep the more able students extended while also supporting less able writers to gain confidence in paragraphing and essay structure. Agh – one of me, many, many of them and many, many needs.

At the end of term I targeted three students with learning challenges that make writing an essay, even one planned together as a class and scaffolded on the whiteboard with starter sentences for each paragraph, an ordeal. So while the rest of the class used the whiteboard prompts and class brainstorm, (uploaded to their notebook using Office Lens) I set them up with a three part lesson on Class Notebook.

In a bid to make it somewhat funky, I used password protect to lock sections in the content library. The first section was pretty much a confidence builder that ended with a code word that would enable them to proceed to the next section.

You can password protect section using OneNote desktop version (not online) by selecting the Review tab in OneNote then clicking the Password button. A Password Protection pane appears at the right side of the window. Select the Set Password button, enter a password in the two fields on the Password Protection window and click OK. If that’s confusing, I recommend this tutorial on the Microsoft Educator’s page.

Remember – this option is only available in the desktop version of Microsoft 2016 or 2010. You can’t password protect sections online and you can’t password protect pages. As I had trouble distributing those sections to student’s individual notebook, I simply got them to copy and paste each section into their own notebooks – after they had cracked the code.

I organised the sections around the essay writing process: planning, drafting, publishing.

The drafting section had coloured headers reminding students what the purpose of each each part of the essay. There were prompts in brackets to get them from sentence to sentence. This was a bit clunky and I had to read it to 2/3 students (although they could have used immersive reader if they had headphones) but we got there after two hours. The third student doesn’t like attention being drawn to the fact they are doing alternative work so they sat with their friends and worked through the sections – no drama.

Once they had written each body paragraph, the students copied that to a third page (publishing) removed the blue headers and bracketed prompts to create a coherent, fluid piece of writing. Time was tight at the end and I wish they’d used immersive reader to help proof and edit as some left the instructions in but that’s par for the course.

I have spent time these holidays giving them individual feedback in the third section. Student X has audio files to listen to – short and to the point, Student Y has stickers and tags indicating parts to review and Student Z has coloured writing and emojis at the end of each paragraph – I went for what I know works best for each of them.

The screen shots will be fuzzy but here’s what it looked like:

 

Part One – plan essay

 

Enter code to proceed

 

Part two – scaffolded draft

 

Part three – remove prompt and publish

 

Student X feedback

Student Y feedback

 

Student Z feedback

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9BM are a diverse range of learners, several with high literacy needs. I’ve been dreading the end of novel essay knowing how hard it would be for many of them.

Last year I used Immersive Reader and Learning Tools with a student with behavioral and literacy needs to keep him engaged so this week, adapted that approach for literary essays.

Initially I planned to use this strategy with one student but at the end of Monday’s lesson, became aware there were at least another two students who would benefit from the heavily scaffolded approach developed using Dictate, Editor Pane, Read Aloud and text highlighting functions as well as Class Notebook to distribute the “lesson” to students.

Here’s how I broke it down for them (this took me one 30 minutes break to set up).

As a class we brainstormed ideas about our character and wrote an introduction together. Using Office Lens I took photos off the white board and sent the files to One Note then copied them into our Class Notebook. This is helpful for revision at the end of the year as well as being accessible for the two students who were absent that day.

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class brainstorm

 

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annotated collective introduction

Instructions were then shared with the two students who needed support by using the Distribute Page function in Class Notebook.

Step 1

Students typed the introduction into a One Note in their own folder.

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Step 2

Students finished sentences for each of the paragraphs in the essay.

 

Step 2

Step 3

Students then had to go back and highlight the S.E.X. and Y sentences in their first body paragraph. This was so they could show me they understood the function of each sentence in the paragraph.

 

Step 3

Step 4

Students copied and paste the paragraphs to lower down the page, took out my instructions and backspaced to run the sentences into paragraphs.

 

Step 4

Using Read Aloud, they listened to their essay read aloud and corrected any wrong/missing words.

Step 5

They then copied and paste into a word document and, using the Editor Pane were able to see any spelling and grammar errors and correct as needed.

 

Step 6

Finally, they printed their finished essays and have filed away for later use.

We used a quiet space outside the classroom while the rest of class worked from the board using starter sentences. The students had to hold the laptops close and speak clearly when using Dictate. Some of the words were typed incorrectly but with Read Aloud, it was obvious where the wrong words were (drain for dream for instance).

Hopefully now my students are familiar with the tools used they’ll become more confident at using them independently.

To finish the lesson I played back one of the student’s essay to the rest of the class, using that as an opportunity to boost her confidence and show the rest of the class how to use Immersive Reader and the Editor Pane.

I believe these students gained a sense of satisfaction from the process and one in particular felt a huge sense of achievement. She can’t wait to show “her” essay to her parents tonight.

#winning

 

 

 

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